See How a Student Scored a Band 8 on the IELTS Essay
Getting a high score on the IELTS writing section takes time and practice.
In this video, we look through a student’s essay that satisfies the requirements of the four scoring criteria:
◾ TR: Task Response
◾ CC: Cohesion and Coherence
◾ LR: Lexical Resource
◾ GRA: Grammatical Range and Accuracy
This student improved by working hard over a period of time. You can do this too.
Challenge suggestions: Some/many people believe that …
A commonly held opinion is that …
A widely held belief is that …
A popular view holds that …
A widespread view of topic is that …
It is popularly thought that
Many are of the view that …
It is commonly believed that …
When it comes to topic, there are those who argue that …
When it comes to topic, one school of thought suggests that …
One school of thought about topic holds that …
General opinion holds that …
There are those who opine that …
Some/Many people are of the mindset that ...
Topic is viewed by some/many as being …
Topic elicits many opinions, one being that…
These days, many people believe that…
A trending view of topic is that…
☑ Note: try to avoid beginning an essay with “It is…” “There is/are …” or any passive structure.
Definitely avoid: It is believed by many that… (overused, passive, It is)
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