IELTS Writing: 5 Common Mistakes Part 1A – Essay Sample

Опубликовано: 16 Август 2020
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Following up on my previous video, this video looks at a sample essay and the main reasons it lost points to score a band 6. See some of the 5 common mistakes people make.

The reasons include not directly answering the task question, using too many “big” words unnaturally and forcefully, not having a progressive argument, bad links, and other reasons.

The score for this essay is:
TR: 4.5 CC:5 LR:6.5 GRA: 7—5.75—6

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