IELTS Essay (7-band), with analysis and rewrite to band 9

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See a test takers sample essay that scored a band 7. The essay is analyzed according to the 4 criteria:

Task response (6)
Cohesion & Coherence (6.5)
Lexical Resource (7)
Grammatical Range & Accuracy (8.5)
Total: 7

Task: The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade. This has made overseas travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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